Sabtu, 08 Januari 2011

MY IDOL

My idol is my mother. Her name is Titi Nurzaidah. She is a housewife. She is thirty eight years old. She was born on Jombang, 27 September 1973. She lives at Prof. Muh. Yamin street number 5, Jombang.
She is thin, slim, and short. Her dace is round. Her hair is short and straight. Her nose is sharp. Her skin is light. Her eyes are black and white. She don’t wear glasses.
She is a kind and good mother.
Her hobby is cooking. She can make delicious food. I like it. She want make me success, a good student, and diligent student.
She is a good mother.

2 komentar:

  1. Awww... You describe your mom as an idol? So sweet :

    oh, and about 'her dace is round' you mean 'her face is round' right?

    And about her eyes color, better written as 'her eyes are black' that's all.

    the sentence 'Her skin is light', what does it mean?

    and I guess you need to shorten the part 'a good, a diligent student' to be 'a good and diligent student'

    Way to go :D

    BalasHapus